I like her face in this version more, her tail probably looks more like a badger’s tail and the details on the fur look better.
On the other hand, I don’t like her haircut (though it is starting to grow on me now that I look at the done version), her backpack’s positioned wrong, her scarf’s too high up on her neck, and I still suck at, um, most aspects of anatomy…
Incidentally, man, I thought hands were bad. But, like, feet. And the thing is, I don’t think I’ve ever actually established in writing that Wilderlings don’t wear shoes. I have no one to blame but myself.
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